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Night falls,
but yet im awake,
is this a dream?
Or has a spell been cast over me?
Am i partaking in something wrong?
Something not experienced by the faintest of hearts.
Eradicate this from me,
take me down in shadows pity,
release me from the burdens of night,
intoxicate me with the ambien,
as it toys with my mind,
tricking my emotions and thoughts.
But, still you're here..
Haunting my dreams, reducing them to nothing.
Thoughts and emotions of sadness,
succumbed, and laying,
in the belly of my heart.
Please, press this button,
and rewind me, to get rid of this disease.
This evil that brings fourth sadness,
with each arising sun.
Then, a sound of solitude comes over me,
the sound of something pure,
something genuine brought over this demon of the night.
The sword of love, striking into the bowels of the shadow,
releasing me, my dreams, and all that is good.
My hero riding in its stride of courage,
into the deep, dark, night of never.
Avenging something I could not,
and casting a spell,
that has not been casted over days,
but then again....
.....
...
..
.
©2003-2010 ~thedeadpoetic
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Jan. 5th, 2003 - I have finally had a full nights sleep, and i cannot feel any better.. I have written a poem describing the struggles of a good nights sleep, and how fast the spell of sleep can be cast on us, ending our conciousness.. I hope you all enjoy it, as much as i enjoyed my victory over the beast..

The ending - gives it the feeling that i dose off the edge of the world..

Thanks to whoever comments/reads/+favs/ or gets something from it..

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:iconmanaborg:
very co0l. I've been such an insomniac lately, I dunno if it's my job, my eating habits, or if it's just for no good reason. Hopefully this'll help me a bit. :) (Smile) THen again, I am a night hawk...:sigh: Nice work though. I like your stuffz.
:icondevilmech:
Awesooooooooome! I get the same feeling at night, and it takes me forever to go to sleep. I like how it sorta drifts off at the end to symbolize losing consciousness. Grade-A stuff man

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Enough of the carrot, it's time to use the stick, and by stick I mean a big motherfucking sledgehammer!
:iconpupbear:
+fav nothing more to say

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Outside things may be tragic, but in here we feel its magic.
:icongrimorial:
I read this out loud to myself and it sounded great. It was like hearing something in a very revered story told by an old man fireside. Good stuff.

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Heinous

a. hateful; atrocious; unpardonable.
:iconc4rri3:
wow ry ry.... it takes me forever to even think of what to write.. nothing ever comes to me like it does you. I love all your poems ;) (Wink) U knew that already though hehe. C U on IRC qt! Hug



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"If I could, I would fix our wrists together in such a fashion that God, Himself, couldn’t tear us apart" -goodbyetomorrow

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